Red Ridge High.
One day, a black unicorn, with Pumpkin-orange and Crimson-red mane and tail, tied in a braid, approached a giant Academy-like building, called, Red Ridge High. The clear visible uniqueness of the unicorn, is her horn. It is curved, compared to the other unicorns' horns.
"To think that a Changeling is allowed to come to school with Ponies. Well, they look at me as an Unicorn, as I hoped." the Changeling Unicorn thought, "Okay, Scorcha Corvoclaw, don't screw-up!"
She walked through the gate, and bumped into another pony. This pony had Sapphire-blue coat with a black Cowgirl hat on. Her mane was Bright-Apple Red and Bright-Apple Green, while her tail was Golden-Apple Yellow and Earthy-Brown.
"New student, eh?" said the pony, "Ah'm Ms. Neon Parkour-Apple, but Ah prefer either; Ms. Parkour-Apple, or Ms. Apple."
"I'm Scorcha, Ma'am." Scorcha greeted, "W-what do you teach?"
"Ah'm the Physical Education Instructor." Neon answered.
"If you excuse me, Ma'am." Scorcha continued to walk until she reached her dorm, A1. Suddenly, enough to scare her, almost out of her disguise, two more mares. One is a slate-blue with curly-blonde mane and tail. She was walking with a Bubblegum-Pink coat and a yellow-green mane. The pink mare was a Pegasi and the slate-blue mare was an Earth pony.
"Oh, somepony got here before us. I'm Angel Note and this place needs to tidied up. It's a mess." Angel note, the pink pegasi greeted.
"Yo, I'm Sun Burst and glad to meet you. What's your IRL address?" Sun Burst the other mare asked.
"My...what?" Scorcha asked.
"She wants to know your electronic mailing address, so she can contact you whenever she needs to." Angel answered.
"Oh. I don't use any technology. I use paper and quill. I'm not used to this, um, socalizing." Scorcha nervously said.
"It's okay, Scorcha. We can help you." Angel smiled.
"Thank you." Scorcha looked away from her new friends.
They spent the rest of the day tiding up the room. There were Three single beds. The one closest to the window was Angel's and her section was loaded with Art and Drama stuff. Sun grabbed the section next to hers, and it was loaded with every gizmo known to ponykind.
In an isolated portion, which was a walk-in closet, became Scorcha's room, and it was painted black. There was enough room for some bookshelves and her bed. On one bookshelf, was Scorcha's schoolbooks Her two dormmates left the dorm to go to their clubs, leaving her alone. While she was putting her normal books, which is only about five, and none of them are normal, and about ten dark-grey dresses, another mare came into her dorm.
"Hello, is Scorcha He-?" the mare looked frightened.
Scorcha looked and noticed that her Changeling wings were visible. She quickly buzzed over to the mare, before she could react, closed the door, and locked it. Before long, she quickly, with magic, locked all windows and blinds.
"Please, don't tell anypony." Scorcha pleaded, but before she could make her threat, the mare spoke.
"Whats it like being a changeling?" the Green mare Pegasi asked, "I'm Storm Custodia."
"I'm Scorcha Corvoclaw, and it's not good. Especially for one whom belongs to no hive." Scorcha sighed, as she let go of Storm.
After awhile, they became friends, knowing each other's darkest secret, and making a vow that they would never reveal the other's secret without permission. Storm returned to A-Three, her dorm. As soon as Scorcha was done, she helped Storm with her dorm.
After a round of Instant Noodles, each of the three mares of A-One went about doing their own seperate thing; Angel was rereading, and citing all the mare parts of "Romeo and Juliet" by Shakehoof. Sun was doing whatever she was doing on her Computer. Scorcha, was reading her Changeling Magic spellbook, which was her mother's.
Wonder what the next day has in store for the Mares of A-1....
omg! I loved that! Sun Burst's intro was AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEE! I ACHTUALLLYLAUGHED not that "breathing quickly out of your nose kind of laugh, like you'd typically see on the interwebs, more of a actual Laughter! so, I guess you'd say i liked it! :>
I kinda figured that one whom is so much tied to Tech, she'll use more of Text talk than normal talk.
Awesome! I love it!
Thank you. It's a bit short, but so was my first Melfar story.
angel: Em, I was talking to storyteller and-
Angel: Er, he was acting quite weird asking me, "What specie is Scorcha what specie?!" do you know anything about this?
Scorcha: *turns away* Why?
Angel: I dunno, just seems weird for a colt to say somethin like that, hey if somepony is bullying you, you tell me. *wink*
You described Angel very well!
Nice job on the story!
Nice job on the story!
Thank you. Can you believe that, besides my own ocs, she was easy. Sun Burst and Storm were a bit harder.
Storyteller: hi!!! I'm Storyteller!!! It's nice to meet youuuuuu.........
Scorcha: H-hello, Storyteller.
Storyteller: uummm, I don't know your name.....can you tell me it please?
Scorcha: I-I'm Scorcha. Scorcha Corvoclaw.
Storyteller: wait a second!!! You're a changeling!!! That last name is a changeling name!!!!!
Scorcha: Eep! *pushes himagainst the wall, with her hoof in his mouth* Please, don't tell anypony. *eyes go into slits* Or else I will cast such a strong illusion of your worse fears than Ponies have been known to die from them. Do I make myself perfectly clear?
Thanks for including storm! I relly like how you portrayed how storm found out.
your good at writing.
your good at writing.
How you like me keeping Storm's secret, well, a secret from the reader?
I thought it really showed the reader that scorch was really trying hard to keeping a secret.
Yep. Read the comments that is below the story. A sudden RP occured, and she had to unleash her threat.
Thank you. I've been writing for about a year on DA, and almost a decade offline.